Christmas 1938, Alcatraz Infirmary

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perezoso

Post by perezoso » December 22nd, 2004, 11:35 pm

yeah, that's right, L-tex, I said you a liar.

and as far as queers, that'd be you and yr okie-texas steers

anyone want to act macho then ya should have the spine to back it up...and as I told skooterbitch and Leefly Assburn many a time I am more than willing to knock any one of yr asses out

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Post by stilltrucking » December 22nd, 2004, 11:54 pm

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perezoso

Post by perezoso » December 23rd, 2004, 12:03 am

Yo StillDunkin':

Aren't you supposed to be at the Dysfunctional Dishwashers-in- Training.com site? Have you figured it out yet that you cannot write?

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Post by stilltrucking » December 23rd, 2004, 12:04 am

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Post by Lightning Rod » December 23rd, 2004, 12:04 am

peredodo

If you want to take me to court, you had better have some evidence.

why am I a liar?
"These words don't make me a poet, these Eyes make me a poet."

The Poet's Eye

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Post by perezoso » December 23rd, 2004, 12:07 am

L-Runt:

You claim to be poet, one

You claim bad-ass when you a pipsqueak

You claim various degrees

You claim genius

when you just an old flute playin' gypsy

anyways , clown

im leaving...this site isnt about writing

its about yr ego and that of yr inept pals

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Post by Lightning Rod » December 23rd, 2004, 12:15 am

ok, bozo

another grand exit, huh?

I claim no degrees, just experience

enough to know who my friends are

this site is about anything you want to make it

if your absence is required, so be it.

it's up to you

put your foot in the stream, then take it out

look what a hole it leaves.

(btw, I'll miss you if you go. You are an endless source of entertainment)
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Post by STUPID BOB » December 23rd, 2004, 12:15 am

perezoso wrote:yeah, that's right, L-tex, I said you a liar.

and as far as queers, that'd be you and yr okie-texas steers

anyone want to act macho then ya should have the spine to back it up...and as I told skooterbitch and Leefly Assburn many a time I am more than willing to knock any one of yr asses out
P, I may have just reconciled supergravity to tori in a three-form tensor field without a constant background. To my knowledge, it has never been done before. What have you done today?

You are a pansy and a blowhard. You're allowed. Come to me little one. I am a fucking nightmare and I'm going to celebrate. You act like you need a break.

St - I wouldn't feel anything right now. I've just touched the stars for the first time in my life - or at least grazed them. Nuggies don't quite have the same appeal.
Carpe Delirium

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Post by Doreen Peri » December 23rd, 2004, 12:36 am

Studio8

A playground for for gr8 wordsmiths.

Ahhh... looks like I missed some ir8 attempts at intimid8ion

geez...

Umm... OK.. about the poem... it was a good poem. I liked it. Lots of imagery that worked well. The verbiage and phrasing accomod8ted me just fine.

At first, I thought the title was a confession to the author's current habitat but then I noticed the date. ;)

gotta go upload some more avatars...

merry Xmiss, perrycomo and all!

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Re: Christmas 1938, Alcatraz Infirmary

Post by izeveryboyin » December 23rd, 2004, 5:21 pm

perezoso wrote:Capone was
moved to the hospital
to feast on hamburger helper
and a stream of visions
(if you may excuse a conjecture):
irish whores and
mayors on the dime
fucking amazing. one day I'll learn not to start off a comment with two-woreded phrases, (or curse-words) and we'll all run round naked in my lawn splashing in the doomed paddling pool of millions of Indian summers past and wonder where the time went!
--K
sometimes I just like to breathe.

www.technicolorfraud.blogspot.com

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Post by judih » December 23rd, 2004, 11:37 pm

sounds good.
great work
naked lawndancing
2 words:
perezoso poem

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