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Post by WIREMAN » April 26th, 2008, 11:09 pm

on the fringe
the razor's flip
binge across
from the bar
the clearness
comes closer
(literal translations
are not needed for
this piece)
on the edge of
the milky way
facing forward
clock tick tick
ticking away
it's what you got
your best shot
the only one
the well done
for it's raining
tonight
time for circling
the wagons
sink or swim

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Post by Artguy » April 26th, 2008, 11:20 pm

time on a razors' edge....great piece wireman...

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Post by WIREMAN » April 26th, 2008, 11:22 pm

thanks kurt
just hangin across from
my favorite bar
on my stoop
pondering the cyber fringe
a lil tuned but together
thanks for responding to
this 1st thought piece

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Post by constantine » April 26th, 2008, 11:28 pm

nice, wireman. it is raining tonight in my fucking head. circling the wagons - the circles get smaller and smaller like the rings of a bullseye.

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Post by westcoast » April 26th, 2008, 11:38 pm

nice one, wireman
sounds like fun
:)

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Post by constantine » April 26th, 2008, 11:40 pm

hi westie.

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Post by westcoast » April 26th, 2008, 11:52 pm

hey! come Jam in the Go! forum. i'm making a coffee and then I'm ready to GO!!!! 10 minutes dudes! be there or be SQUARE.

~go westie

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Post by mtmynd » April 27th, 2008, 12:01 am

que chingon, wired, mi amigo!

:)

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Post by WIREMAN » April 27th, 2008, 8:54 pm

thanks for the cool responses
westie....dino.....and cecil
sorry i missed the chance to jam
last night, partying got in the way :D

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Post by gypsyjoker » April 28th, 2008, 6:00 am

Sink or swim
Ride or slide
Beyond the fringe
Slip down the razors edge
Clock tick tick
Ticking away
Literally


Well-done wireman
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Post by WIREMAN » April 28th, 2008, 9:57 am

i feel the power jack...........

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Post by gypsyjoker » April 28th, 2008, 12:11 pm

I can see the time mark
But I am still powerless
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