Jersey turnpike

[jweeble]

Jersey Turnpike

Low tight jeans
showcase
perma-marked flesh
as
bosom and belly
compete
for marquee status.
Raccooned eyes
highlighted
in
stiffened-purposefully
morning-after hair,
the stage set
for the evening's entertainment...
Armour-all glossed
lips' wrap, bitingly
'round chewed-up
chewed-on
vowels
give directions
to where
she thinks I ought go...
before
sauntering
back
to the eternal-lit
corner...
which first
spewed her
to watch
and wait
for the next
object of derision,
her turnpike exit
nothing
but
flashy fronts'
attempts
at attitude,
and homes
with
little
worthwhile
inside.

[judih]

Armour-all glossed
lips' wrap, bitingly
'round chewed-up
chewed-on
vowels
give directions
to where
she thinks I ought go...

oh, i love this!
yum
great stuff

[constantine]

as bosum and belly compete for marquee status - !!! wild stuff, jweeble. i like the staccato pace and the caustic content.

[WIREMAN]

like waterfalls the words flow down the page....great read....

[westcoast]

good one! i like your style

~westcoast

[jweeble]

Thanks - I could just see/hear her standing there...