- CON-FLICT! -

[HaroHalola]

The acquaintance of
a Friend once, perhaps twice spoke
to me, in a ME

moment her, dawning
Morns spent deferent, of-sort
obeisant to In-

clemency, as an
augur at a rune, & the
Night spent s'mothered

into the pillow
like she would sten the pulse of
imminent Day-Light...

Nay enough! Know, not
ever, for the reigning Queen
Cimmerian, not

darken the Plea, to
Me, I, of Love and the Rain
She as compainer

as explainer of
Kamikazewedlock to
the Sellff, a faux glee

of Shescorn uneased,
breezily romanced by a
puppe in Truthpalsy.

H.e.m.
8.8.MMv.
(Revised...)
S.W.

[jweeble]

H'H -

You always make me think (and research!)...lovely as always...

Jen

[HaroHalola]

Jen - TY; Others' Work pales (& some, pails) if the comparisons be proffered to Yours; I say this with full faculty, w/o compunction. If I have in-deed contributed to this effort, then my Heart for It has increased in Joyful abundance - TY! H'H.

[gypsyjoker]

harohalola
howdy and thank you
Everybody here trying to explain poetry to me
it beats me
but this was good
I suppose it was poetry
whatever
it blew me away
what can I say
this my first reply to one of your poems
I have to sit on my hands cause poetry makes me so happy
I want to reply to every poem I enjoy

but even so I had to resist
the temptation to google words
I just had a gut feeling I could get the meaning
by just reading
I hope this sounds like high praise
cause it ease((is))

welcome to the monkey house
doreen's asylum for the terminally vain and brokenhearted

and looking forward to reading all your posts
but hoping I can contain myself and just sit on my hands.
and not reply to every one.
sincerely
jt

[Doreen Peri]

I like the way it sounds.
But I wish I understood it.

[gypsyjoker]

It would be presumptuous of me to try and explain it. Right?

Sorry about the asylum comment
Just me trying to be poetic.

This is the word that almost tempted me to google

Kamikazewedlock