fondling thought with hybrid wings from angelic whispers
fondling thought with hybrid wings from angelic whispers
fondling thought with hybrid wings from angelic whispers
i've sailed the several sees
of many dichotomies
found refuge in lobotomies
silenced thru trichotomies
counted in threes
upon my knees
before I sneeze
all my philosophies
seizing the astrologies
seen by astronomies
leaving me within a freeze
that I can barely wheeze
but just listen to my pleas
please... please... please
this is not a tease
but a self-analyses
of things you
truly mean to me
so we can be
in the cosmic sea
sharing our love
for all eternity.
i've sailed the several sees
of many dichotomies
found refuge in lobotomies
silenced thru trichotomies
counted in threes
upon my knees
before I sneeze
all my philosophies
seizing the astrologies
seen by astronomies
leaving me within a freeze
that I can barely wheeze
but just listen to my pleas
please... please... please
this is not a tease
but a self-analyses
of things you
truly mean to me
so we can be
in the cosmic sea
sharing our love
for all eternity.
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pretty poem mtmynd
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don't mind me
I am just fondling
a poem
I am just fondling
a poem
Free Rice
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mtmynd, sorry for the intrusion. manic phase. enjoyed your poem. i know - dull reply, but the truth nonetheless. the above comment was an inside joke between clay and me (and all you good people out there in tv land.)
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don't know what got into me. would delete but don't know how.
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constantine : "this rhymes. and it's maudlin. maybe a new title. maybe not. i find it entertaining. but perhaps that was not your purpose."
i'm disappointed in them words outta you. not a bit original at all. sounds exactly like something i was reading amongst replies yesterday. i know you can do so much better, buddy, if your pomes are any indication of your originality. but then again, we all can't be what others expect all the time now, can we ?
L'Rod : "ouch!"
an understood reaction to a sharp pain. (place a positive looking emoticon here.)
gj : "don't mind me; I am just fondling a poem"
great line! makes my poem horny, you bastard! (pls don't take that remark seriously. you know i kid!)
J : "bee's knees"
i was >>>> this close <<<< to making some cheap comment about eating bees because of this. but i'm a better person than that... especially around honest women.
Thx, kid!
i'm disappointed in them words outta you. not a bit original at all. sounds exactly like something i was reading amongst replies yesterday. i know you can do so much better, buddy, if your pomes are any indication of your originality. but then again, we all can't be what others expect all the time now, can we ?

L'Rod : "ouch!"
an understood reaction to a sharp pain. (place a positive looking emoticon here.)
gj : "don't mind me; I am just fondling a poem"
great line! makes my poem horny, you bastard! (pls don't take that remark seriously. you know i kid!)
J : "bee's knees"
i was >>>> this close <<<< to making some cheap comment about eating bees because of this. but i'm a better person than that... especially around honest women.

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