qualtrane

Post your poetry, any style.
Post Reply
mtmynd
Posts: 7752
Joined: August 15th, 2004, 8:54 pm
Location: El Paso

qualtrane

Post by mtmynd » May 3rd, 2008, 8:23 pm

qualtrane


she speaks in nuances
that transcend logic
underestimating the value
of disbelief as a rusty token
given to the gutter in exchange
for a dream of complete nakedness

User avatar
gypsyjoker
Posts: 1458
Joined: May 26th, 2005, 9:01 am
Location: stilltrucking's vanity
Contact:

Post by gypsyjoker » May 3rd, 2008, 8:50 pm

juxtaposition

freedom

is

lonely

if

you

can't

share

it

by mtmynd on August 29, 2003 20:47:00
Free Rice
Avatar Courtesy of the Baron de Hirsch Fund

'Blessed is he who was not born, Or he, who having been born, has died. But as for us who live, woe unto us, Because we see the afflictions of Zion, And what has befallen Jerusalem." Pseudepigrapha

westcoast
Posts: 798
Joined: March 8th, 2008, 5:53 pm

Post by westcoast » May 3rd, 2008, 9:08 pm

cool
:)

mtmynd
Posts: 7752
Joined: August 15th, 2004, 8:54 pm
Location: El Paso

Post by mtmynd » May 3rd, 2008, 10:20 pm

:shock: gaw'lie, gj! dang near 5 years ago!! i think it's still good, don't you? wow. you're something else... and don't let them tell you otherwise now, hear? :wink:

thx, J. but yet another brief moment of word play that seemingly rattles the inner cage until they are turned into sounds flying randomly off in directions unknown to anyone or anything but themselves. ((:roll: ))

User avatar
gypsyjoker
Posts: 1458
Joined: May 26th, 2005, 9:01 am
Location: stilltrucking's vanity
Contact:

Post by gypsyjoker » May 4th, 2008, 9:58 am

Yes I may be something else, but you did not mention what :wink:

Something sounded familiar about the title
(oh lordy, not titles again he says to him self)

So I googled it and found the next poem you wrote after that and juxtaposed it. I been into juxtapositions lately.

To bad those litkicks archives don't go back to 1999 when we first met here on the net.
Free Rice
Avatar Courtesy of the Baron de Hirsch Fund

'Blessed is he who was not born, Or he, who having been born, has died. But as for us who live, woe unto us, Because we see the afflictions of Zion, And what has befallen Jerusalem." Pseudepigrapha

User avatar
constantine
Posts: 2677
Joined: March 9th, 2008, 9:45 am

Post by constantine » May 4th, 2008, 10:32 am

i keep coming back to this which tells me in and of itself that it has a poetic allure.

User avatar
WIREMAN
Posts: 7576
Joined: August 15th, 2004, 7:52 pm
Location: Frederick, Md.
Contact:

Post by WIREMAN » May 4th, 2008, 1:01 pm

gawwali train
where would i be
without my can't
live with 'em
can't live with out
woman, right now
she's over @ the
bar grazing on
cilantro drinking the
fruit of the vine

User avatar
mnaz
Posts: 7844
Joined: August 15th, 2004, 10:02 pm
Location: north of south

Post by mnaz » May 4th, 2008, 6:49 pm

that seems like a fair exchange.

Post Reply

Return to “Poetry”

Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users and 2 guests