i am better than you

[YABYUM]

i am better than your whole fuckin self completed even when you think i am not.

i am better than you.

i could beat you in a fist to fist.
i could be you if you were piss.

i am better than you.

i could beat you into submission just because i want to.
i could manipulate.
i could make you give me free cocaine.

i am better than you.

i beat the word god.
i ejaculated on jesus christs fad.

i am stronger than you.
i am better.
better.
better.

i bet her i didnt wanna fuck her,
so she dove through my window.
i laughed as she looked to her bleeding
and pulled tiny glass fragments from her sorry jealous soul.

i am better than you.

i
i
i
i
i slept in a porta potty after i fucked a chick against it.
it was cold when she left me alone.
did my cum freeze on her face?

i am better than you.

(to be added to)

[mnaz]

Nice to meet you.

I'm better than me too.

[gypsyjoker]

mnaz wrote

I'm better than me too.

Yes
I think I must be better than somebody.
I hope it is me.

[Doreen Peri]

I think Geoff (Axanderdeath) wrote this same title once.

You're both better than me. No doubt.

[Arcadia]

I guess I already read that? or not?
yeah, it luckily works that way. Other reply could be: well, well... it´s enough... go with the music to other side, si? !!!!!

[Lightning Rod]

ok ronnie,
let me tell you why this piece is slightly insulting to the reader
it's elitist
it's undemocratic
oh, I could go with, 'I am as good as you.'
or, 'I am the same as you.'
but, 'I am BETTER than you' is a little much
I admire your moxie but if you are better, then how come you ain't rich?

[Doreen Peri]

he's probably just as rich as you, Lightning Rod.

[Lightning Rod]

he's probably just as rich as you, Lightning Rod.

I never wanted to be rich
just better
better than I was yesterday
not better than you

[gypsyjoker]

Yeah ronnie I love a good fight

a fair fight

no hitting below the belt

never met a man that I was not so afraid of him that I did not want to come up behind him and...

But women scare the piss out of me

never know when one of them is going to hit below the belt

that't why I always run from them.

[Doreen Peri]

You are definitely better, Lightning.
You're better than you were yesterday.
AND you're better than me, whether you wanted to be or not.
How do I know that?
You told me often enough.



lol



And I'm glad you're not rich since you never wanted to be. Who wants something they don't want?

[Lightning Rod]

And I'm glad you're not rich since you never wanted to be. Who wants something they don't want?

If I wanted to be rich, I'm surely smart enough to get there. But I'm also smart enough not to want to be there.

[gypsyjoker]

This is the bit that interest me Clay.

Old ronnie reading along with us

Yabyum wrote

i am better than you.

(to be added to)

[bennie2]

if i were rich i'd buy a tenemant flat with all the original victorian detailing in glasgow's westend. then i'd invite ronnie over to paint it for me. he's probably better at that than i am.

ha.

this piece of writing reeks of the morning-after-soul-howls that i've read of bukowski's.

[Doreen Peri]

where did it go? where is your beautiful poem, bennie?

what's with my computer? i was reading it and clicked to reply and it's gone!

sob

gawd i hope you kept that!

please post it again?

[bennie2]

it got to be a little bit "too much" for a reply, doreen. so i posted it as a fresh post.

however, how the fuck did you manage to read it? i hadn't clicked submit. i don't even think i hit preview...