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Dissonance

Post by mnaz » May 11th, 2008, 8:05 am

Dissonance, the only masterpiece.
Trot out your theories of coherence,
or despise their unintelligible reality.
But dissonance cannot depart.
It is here with us, large earth,
despite the view.

In Burma lives the tenth largest army.
Can't figure how to live together in Burma,
how to patrol, how to figure human dignity and love.
The tenth largest army is pretty common these days.
Dissonance is the next hill of any proper warrior,
despite the view.

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Post by mtmynd » May 11th, 2008, 8:50 am

"Dissonance is the next hill of any proper warrior, despite the view."

Those proper warriors love their discord... gives them purpose and reason. (damn them)

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Post by gypsyjoker » May 11th, 2008, 9:07 am

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The engine driving self-justification is cognitive dissonance: "a state of tension that occurs whenever a person holds two cognitions (ideas, attitudes, beliefs, opinions) that are psychologically inconsistent," Tavris and Aronson explain. "Dissonance produces mental discomfort, ranging from minor pangs to deep anguish; people don't rest easy until they find a way to reduce it." It is in that process of reducing dissonance that the self-justification accelerator is throttled up.

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Post by Arcadia » May 11th, 2008, 10:08 am

is there still someone
with audition capacity for that? :lol:

good writing!!!!!! :)

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Post by mnaz » May 11th, 2008, 2:24 pm

dissonance, a universal harmony.
a clock in the throes of space.
hope in a bottomless chamber.
turn the page, take a breath,
numbered, forms come and go.
i never saw it coming.

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Post by westcoast » May 11th, 2008, 2:30 pm

dissonance:
the evolutionary impulse
the flicker of the lizard brain
kill it or fuck it


good piece!

~westie

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Post by Lightning Rod » May 11th, 2008, 2:36 pm

Dissonance is a color
must be on the palette
music, like any art, depends on tension
the tension between rhythm and tone
the tension between dissonance and consonance
the tension between invention or confusion and resolve

dissonance is pain
(some people like pain)
and consonance is pleasure or release

the magic is combining them in just the right way
"These words don't make me a poet, these Eyes make me a poet."

The Poet's Eye

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Post by mnaz » May 11th, 2008, 2:37 pm

Makes sense, really. It's as ageless and timeless as a broken heart.

Thanks Cec, Jack, Arcadia, westie, & Clay.

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