Moo dee waters

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hester_prynne
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Moo dee waters

Post by hester_prynne » May 20th, 2008, 12:37 am

Moo dee waters,
are drowners.
Graduates like me,
know to sync quickly,
to bottom of pool.
Shivering yes,
but hardly cold
in my warm,
impenetrable,
ball of cool.
I can
close my eyes
and be embraced
by images
that no one else
can see.
Faces
I might have known
in another life,
fade in and out,
amongst purples, yellows,
colors unknown
to humans,
in a mindscreen
slide show,
starring
sweet expressions,
directed
only towards me,
here,
under my eyelids,
here
on the other side
of what some say,
is all there is.
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Post by gypsyjoker » May 20th, 2008, 12:41 am

on the other side
of what some say,
is all there is.
you read me
to still waters
thank you
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Post by hester_prynne » May 20th, 2008, 12:46 am

I see your face there Still....
And I thank you

H 8)
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Post by mtmynd » May 20th, 2008, 12:59 am

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  :coda
           acid 
                          .......lucidity

            re:creating

            re:creation
            
(way)          
under 
          
                         eye
                         lids

b.l.i.n.k.i.n.g.
b.l.i.n.k.i.n.g.

thx hes'... it helped. :wink:

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Post by WIREMAN » May 20th, 2008, 1:28 am

we have all been here..........before

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Post by westcoast » May 20th, 2008, 2:10 am

i enjoy your unique penetrating style Hester.

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Post by constantine » May 20th, 2008, 12:01 pm

this is very cool. an excellent read.

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