Au Clandestine

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hester_prynne
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Post by hester_prynne » May 21st, 2008, 5:17 pm

Beautiful mist,
rude foghorns
misinterpret;
based on truths,
that they don't
even know yet;
like when
adam ruined lily,
inside his
own inflate,
dissing her
well before,
unlikely
second dates,
calling her
independent,
not second place
enough,
starting nasty rumors,
homophobic genes
and stuff,
even now
post ice age,
when daughters meet
Au Clandestine,
she urges them
"go naked!,
holler loud!
swig red wine;
"then shout!"
she says in merriment,
"into one-way looking glass,
"we always have,
and always will,
be the ones
who best
kick ass".


(Heh)
"I am a victim of society, and, an entertainer"........DW

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Post by mtmynd » May 21st, 2008, 7:30 pm

inspired. no, no... i.n.S.P.I.r.e.d.!.!. i enjoyed the read, the rhythm, the snap...

pass the redwine, Hes'... cheers!

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hester

Post by the mingo » May 22nd, 2008, 6:45 am

well don't i just love it when ya sound out!...and i hope you're whole day is a poem & i'm really slippery glad ya got out from behind that beaded curtain but kept the mystery...only a woman can do that yes m'am...
making a noise in this world
making a noise in this world
you can bet your ass
i won't go quietly
making a noise in this world
Robbie Robertson
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Post by westcoast » May 22nd, 2008, 10:38 am

very cool, hester. unique as the artist.

~westie

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Post by gypsyjoker » May 22nd, 2008, 12:08 pm

oh my white sister
if it were only true



good poem hester
don't let me rain on her parade

I am of a mood to kick some ass
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Post by gypsyjoker » May 22nd, 2008, 12:15 pm

"into one-way looking glass,
"we always have,
and always will,
be the ones
who best
kick ass".
I am wondering why it is in " "
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Post by gypsyjoker » May 22nd, 2008, 1:06 pm

oh
8)

now I see

keep the faith
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