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WIREMAN
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Love 2 Love

Post by WIREMAN » June 10th, 2008, 2:46 pm

sunken eyes
whispering wind
stole my heart
I took it
back again
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Post by saw » June 10th, 2008, 3:06 pm

many seduced
by the whispering wind
she's a temptress,
give in...
unsink your eyes.
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading
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Post by goldenmyst » June 10th, 2008, 11:12 pm

Wireman, you surf the cosmic wave. Far out. ;)

John
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Post by WIREMAN » June 11th, 2008, 12:17 pm

thanks for reading and responding steve and john.....it's actually the beginning of a song i'm writing......
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