Blind Date With Destiny

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saw
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Blind Date With Destiny

Post by saw » June 10th, 2008, 3:01 pm

Hi, are you Carol ?
Hi, nice to meet you,
you know Carol, you may think
the universe is stable,
but in fact, we are a seething
maelstrom of subatomic particles
fleetingly popping in and out
of existence, the measurement
of their physical properties,
uncertain at best, meaning
we cannot know both the energy
and the lifetime of a particle,
which tells us, Carol,
a subatomic event occurring
within a tiny time frame involves
an uncertain amount of energy.
Obviously Carol, when Albert theorized
that E=mc2, that meant that all
elementary particles interact with other
quantum particles which appear
out of nowhere demonstrating
that this subatomic tango, however brief,
when added across the universe
gives rise to enormous energy....
more than is contained in all the matter
in the world, did you ever wonder, Carol,
whether gravity and magnetism could be linked ?

No, I really haven't considered that Norman...
I 'm a little confused between the emotion
that wants to call a cab and the emotion
that wants to rip your clothes off.
Give me a little time to sort this out.
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Post by Arcadia » June 10th, 2008, 5:15 pm

oh...!! (I remember a conversation like that but maybe with less technical vocabulary!!!!! :lol:). Funny writing!!!!!!

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Post by saw » June 11th, 2008, 5:52 am

thanx, Arcadia for the read and comments.....peace, ... steve
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Post by emel.scott » June 11th, 2008, 11:18 am

so imma jus drivin my cab down da road, contemplatin' da universe ya know and I see dis chick trying to flag me down... at da same time she's tryin ta rip da clothes offa this dude. I pull over and say, "hey baby, where ya'll headed?" an she say, "I don't know but take us there" ... sos i slips it into reverse, cause the only place i knows is where I been ...
We should not mind if on our ear there fell. Some less of cunning, more of oracle...Thoreau

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Post by Lightning Rod » June 11th, 2008, 12:27 pm

I know you have changed the names to protect the guilty
"These words don't make me a poet, these Eyes make me a poet."

The Poet's Eye

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Post by hester_prynne » June 11th, 2008, 12:42 pm

I say rip his clothes off!!!!

another totally digable write saw...
H 8)
"I am a victim of society, and, an entertainer"........DW

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Post by saw » June 12th, 2008, 5:11 am

thanx...scott, LRod and heater....enjoyed your comments
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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