If I Could

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saw
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If I Could

Post by saw » June 19th, 2008, 6:39 am

If I could turn my thoughts into words,
flush these drugs that make such empty promises,
these substances that calm my soul

but fail to deliver the goods,
my addiction would fade
like the lilting colors of the leaves

when the spirits of winter return.
If I could let the words roll off my tongue
they might saturate your soul.

If I could touch your heart with my hand,
you would feel the passion behind my eyes.
It would be so easy......if I could.
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Post by Doreen Peri » June 19th, 2008, 9:24 am

sure ya could!

hell, you just did! :)

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Post by constantine » June 19th, 2008, 11:23 am

he's a smoothie.

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Post by gypsyjoker » June 19th, 2008, 11:32 am

If I could turn my thoughts into words,
I love that line, it's practically a koan I think
maybe


Before I had words
I had the truth
Since then I have learned to lie
They say crockadiles smile
but at least a reptillian smile is sincere.

sorry for the ramble
your excellent pome
made it irrisistable
thank you
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Post by saw » June 19th, 2008, 11:59 am

thanx doreen, if I can win you over, I must be doin' somethin' right...
smilessss.....Dino I resent being called a Smoothie, which we all know
is a Fruit drink.....more smilessssssss...and thank you gypsyjoker for
you very fine poetic response...much appreciated........peace........
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Post by mnaz » June 20th, 2008, 3:11 am

You did.

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