june 20 2008

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the mingo
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Post by the mingo » June 20th, 2008, 7:47 am

this poem
lives alone
with it all its birthdays
scattered around it like the low weathered walls
of indian ruins just barely breaking the surface
of new mexico exposing themselves to a wind
that has been hundreds of thousands of years
in the making

(the photograph of this poem in words was
submitted to studio 8 at 7:44 a.m. on
Midsummer's Eve,June 20,2008)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Post by gypsyjoker » June 20th, 2008, 8:00 am

a long day
a long way
anasazi pictographs
ancient astronomers
light and shadows
mark the seasons

The ancient ones
always we walk
in their footsteps

In the long run
the walls of our sky scrapers
will barely brake the surface

I love the wind
my life is in it.

mingo
thanks for a reason to scribble a few lines
I hope I have not vandalized your excellent poem
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Post by saw » June 20th, 2008, 8:34 am

there is a mysticism to this, the notion of this wind that has been
forming for thousands of years...an interesting way to mark a point in time.....enjoyed
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Post by gypsyjoker » June 20th, 2008, 10:55 am

Acoma New Mexico
Passed through so many times
And never noticed
The shadows on the wall


I never hear the wind here
It diminishes me not to
the wind sounds the same
through out the ages
speaks of the ghosts
from remote consciousness

It takes silence to hear it
and there is no silence here

thanks for the sound of this one
I needed it
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Post by the mingo » June 20th, 2008, 2:19 pm

hey gypsy, & don't worry 'bout vandalizing anything,ya didn't, and i like hearing from ya anyway anytime...thanks for reading and I'm glad ya enjoyed it as much as did...saw,thx for reading as always and glad you enjoyed it too
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Post by Lightning Rod » June 20th, 2008, 2:52 pm

could be that the longest day is the origin of the wind

nice piece, mingo
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Post by the mingo » June 20th, 2008, 11:11 pm

thx, Lightning,for reading & for seeing, & as always,for saying so...
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Post by goldenmyst » June 23rd, 2008, 11:57 pm

Mingo I've walked the ruins of Chaco Canyon. Your poem captures the spirit of the place.

John

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