Juanita

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saw
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Juanita

Post by saw » June 20th, 2008, 5:10 pm

red neon
sputters, flashes
Jose's Cantina
on the brim
of an ancient fedora
cocked defiantly...
a precise angle
keeping one eye secret...
a disheveled old man
mumbles
to his salt shaker.

I like this place,

mosey on in
sidle up on the barstool...
the amigo two seats down
recites Shakespeare's sonnets
in pidgin English
to a hushed crowd
of pig farmers....
the bartender grimaces
as the Tijuana Sun Dogs
crush the Mighty Texaca Mud Hens
in extra innings,

he cleans shot glasses
with a filthy red bandanna.

When I order cerveza
the juke box stops
Los Lonely Boys in mid-lyric...
conversation ceases,
you could hear a taco drop.
I realize my error,
order a shot of Tequila
and I'm joined in a flash
of dripping gold
by the lovely Juanita Chiquita,

The Chihuahua Coquette.

My final memory
is watching Juanita
doing a spicy hat dance
with this part in
and that part out
as I sipped the warm agave...
Later, I catch myself humming
Hotel California, unsure
of what had happened,
but satisfied.
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Post by judih » June 20th, 2008, 10:52 pm

juanita
chihuahua sombrero
a round mood with a smile at the end

saw
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Post by saw » June 21st, 2008, 7:28 am

thanx judih, just havin' a little fantasy fun ala Hotel California....
if I start gettin' too serious, something like this emerges to strike
a balance.....thanx for reading and commenting...........
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Post by westcoast » June 21st, 2008, 9:37 am

fun piece, saw. i especially like the set-up in the first stanza.

~westie

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Post by Arcadia » June 21st, 2008, 10:32 am

that´s good!!!! mmm... I guess you´re not Pancho Villa!! :lol:

beautiful-funny postcard!!!!!!! :)

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