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mtmynd
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Post by mtmynd » June 21st, 2008, 10:50 pm

you say the words
are on the tip
of your tongue

i'll suck them off
for the passion
speaks louder than
the words ever will

one moan at a time
building into a
crescendo of ecstasy
that would leave
anais nin speechless

her pen spent of ink
with a drypoint
sketching vapors
of heat left behind

((wordless))

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Post by westcoast » June 22nd, 2008, 9:08 am

a
crescendo of ecstasy
that would leave
anais nin speechless
great lines -- deep passions

enjoyed!

~westie

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Post by mtmynd » June 23rd, 2008, 4:36 pm

Thanks, westie, for the reply. Thought I'd better answer you before this brilliant poem ended up on the next page, never to be seen again. Whoa! That would be a cruel trick on originality and creativity!

signed,

Mr Humble

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Post by westcoast » June 23rd, 2008, 9:41 pm

lol!

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Post by mtmynd » June 25th, 2008, 10:46 am

westie-j ... it's not so much your 'lol' but that calm glow on your face in the aftermath of those lol's that get to me...

TY :)

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