Why I Love Haiku

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Why I Love Haiku

Post by Lightning Rod » June 27th, 2008, 9:00 pm

the only thing I
like about haiku is that
they are short, thank you
"These words don't make me a poet, these Eyes make me a poet."

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Post by emel.scott » June 28th, 2008, 1:43 am

I liked it the other way much better
We should not mind if on our ear there fell. Some less of cunning, more of oracle...Thoreau

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Post by Lightning Rod » June 28th, 2008, 12:55 pm

emel.scott wrote:I liked it the other way much better
I couldn't remember the other one
I must have been in a state of zen :oops:
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Post by emel.scott » July 4th, 2008, 1:41 am

I believe that's Xenia and it's in Ohio
We should not mind if on our ear there fell. Some less of cunning, more of oracle...Thoreau

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Post by mousey1 » July 6th, 2008, 1:51 pm

haiku don't come 'round
no more, stuck within its habits
floated like a turd away from shore

what I don't like about haiku is
it's not supposed to rhyme
dagnabbit!

haiku leaves me cold
shivering to grasp its flame
tinder it to spark
I used to walk with my head in the clouds but I kept getting struck by lightning!
Now my head twitches and I drool alot. Anonymouse

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