(unnecesary) war-ning

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Arcadia
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(unnecesary) war-ning

Post by Arcadia » June 29th, 2008, 9:01 pm

You can laugh
at my beers, Baileys & caipirinhas.
You can laugh
at my Garcia´s & Marley´s songs.
It´s ok.
You can also add to the list
uruguayan humor & monotonous voice
and maybe make me laugh.
That´s also ok.
But never ask me to consume you on fridays.

Te podés reír
de mis cervezas, mis Baileys and mis caipirinhas.
Te podés reír
de mis canciones de García y de Marley.
Podés agregar a la lista
humor uruguayo con voz monótona
y quizás hacerme reír.
Eso también está bien.
Pero no me pidas que te consuma un viernes.

(inspired in an old friend´s mail: a recurrent theme with each time more acid-creative variations :lol: )

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Post by constantine » June 30th, 2008, 2:04 pm

uruquayan humor is vastly underated.

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Post by westcoast » June 30th, 2008, 2:49 pm

lol!

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Post by Perdida » July 1st, 2008, 3:05 am

love that ending line :D
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Post by saw » July 1st, 2008, 6:03 am

I agree with all the above......nice work
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Post by hester_prynne » July 2nd, 2008, 4:53 pm

Hah! I do diggity this!
Nice one Arcadia!
H 8)
"I am a victim of society, and, an entertainer"........DW

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