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mnaz
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Post by mnaz » July 2nd, 2008, 3:16 am

Somewhere there's a light on,
or a torrential, blinding flood.
Rocks still creep and strain.
I live in an ancient time.

Maybe on other planets
jellyfish vibrate to their music,
wiggle in their primordial wobble.
Maybe their descendants do.

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Post by the mingo » July 2nd, 2008, 8:15 am

the sound of gunfire woke me up this morning - even without looking out the window I knew it was you - Good Mornin',Parabellum - nice shooting...
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Post by judih » July 2nd, 2008, 8:50 am

so mingo calls the gunfire parabellum
i call it jellyfish looking for the sea

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Post by constantine » July 2nd, 2008, 8:58 am

i like your work - geology, natural science, provides rich metaphor. have you ever read loren eiseley's essays - i think you would enjoy them.

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Post by mtmynd » July 2nd, 2008, 10:20 am

nazzer... i read these things and think 'naztracts' (as in abstracts). you're naztracts are getting more solid each time i read one... short, brief, to the pointless point pointing circularly. interesting, amigo... very interesting.

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Post by Arcadia » July 2nd, 2008, 1:06 pm

abisal colors!!!!!
thanks for sharing them!! :)

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