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HaroHalola
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Post by HaroHalola » July 4th, 2008, 7:16 pm

the BIG kids are out
t'night blowin' their works and
shootin'-up maws for

the celebration
in violence-colors of
the Trail of Tears, and

an homage to the
candles of Rome, and N*****-
chasers, from China...

the BIG kids are out
Oh Yeah! To blow their works and
shoot pueriled rockets

where they stand between
the cherry bombs' & ash cans'
Independance Show.

H.e.m.
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Post by Doreen Peri » July 4th, 2008, 9:10 pm

strange country that celebrates their heritage with the sights and sounds of war.

big booms going off everywhere... glad i know it's not real

my backyard is full of smoke

and the rockets red glare

.. replied to this at PIB... with another poem

sorry i have no poetry in my atm

boom boom out go the lights

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Post by westcoast » July 4th, 2008, 10:10 pm

lol... our national celebration is not nearly as noisy. polite canadians!

good one, H.e.m.

~westcoast

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Post by HaroHalola » July 5th, 2008, 7:55 pm

Yeah, Canada, but ya got Hockey, eh? TY, as always - H'H./H.e.m.
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Post by Lightning Rod » July 5th, 2008, 10:53 pm

I'm the last person qualified to point fingers about speling, but......
independance? Was that dileberete?
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Post by mtmynd » July 5th, 2008, 11:40 pm

i wondered that, too, eLRod, but i was also reminded of a 60's Family Dog concert poster by Rick Griffin, "Independance" held on July 4, 1967... 41 years ago. Coincidence?

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Post by HaroHalola » July 5th, 2008, 11:43 pm

INDEED!, INDEED! :idea: Was THAT!?
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