Letter to a Friend--are we in the Moment?

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Post by stilltrucking » July 6th, 2008, 3:50 pm

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“Never mind.”
Nice poem Clay
I lost my way here
please excuse this back edit
of my original post
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Post by westcoast » July 6th, 2008, 3:50 pm

OK so it's the response they are after? So in order to make them stop abusing you, you just allow them to abuse you without responding to it? Like it doesn't matter? LOL... not funny really. I'm very serious.
no, that is not what i am saying. i am sorry it wasn't clear. if you would like to discuss offline sometime i can make myself available.

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Post by Lightning Rod » July 6th, 2008, 3:56 pm

ok, let's quit equivocating about this
doreen is obliquely saying that I am somehow abusing her
she wrote me a note last night asking met to leave her alone and not tag her posts
I would ask for the same courtesy

I don't know what fantasies anyone else has about this matter, but for my part, I'm just trying to share my work and have some quality conversation. I'm not trying to make this personal.
"These words don't make me a poet, these Eyes make me a poet."

The Poet's Eye

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Post by stilltrucking » July 6th, 2008, 4:00 pm

I guess I should of just
dotted this out ...


Image

“Never mind.”

This is turning into some kind of arguement that I thought I understood but I realize I don't

once again please pardon this back edit of my original post.

good luck and best wishes for many good moments to come
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Post by stilltrucking » July 6th, 2008, 4:06 pm

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“Never mind.”


Write on bro
pardon the back edit
of my original post
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Post by stilltrucking » July 6th, 2008, 4:12 pm

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“Never mind.”
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Post by Doreen Peri » July 6th, 2008, 4:13 pm

Lightning Rod wrote:ok, let's quit equivocating about this
doreen is obliquely saying that I am somehow abusing her
she wrote me a note last night asking met to leave her alone and not tag her posts
I would ask for the same courtesy

I don't know what fantasies anyone else has about this matter, but for my part, I'm just trying to share my work and have some quality conversation. I'm not trying to make this personal.
You are imagining things.

I will delete all my posts to your thread. Sorry you read between the lines. You always say I read between the lines. You say you don't mean how I take it when you say certain things. Well this has now happened again. How does it feel to read between the lines? Is what you are imagining really there?

I hate the internet. I truly do. I may be taking a leave of absence from this site, just like I'm doing at PIB.

This is a defining moment. Peace.

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Post by stilltrucking » July 6th, 2008, 4:14 pm

...

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“Never mind.”
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Post by Lightning Rod » July 6th, 2008, 5:13 pm

I guess we all look for our 'moment' of drama

even if it's a grand exit
"These words don't make me a poet, these Eyes make me a poet."

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Post by stilltrucking » July 6th, 2008, 5:21 pm

...

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“Never mind.”
Treasure your moments amigo.
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Post by Lightning Rod » July 6th, 2008, 5:22 pm

"These words don't make me a poet, these Eyes make me a poet."

The Poet's Eye

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Post by stilltrucking » July 6th, 2008, 5:35 pm

...

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“Never mind.”

but what do I know
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Post by Arcadia » July 6th, 2008, 5:46 pm

very graphic poem, l-rod!!! :)

yeah, it seems moments keep happening!!!!!!! (today I have the vague clarity that four days with gripe leaves in your mind!!!! :roll: :lol: )

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Post by mnaz » July 6th, 2008, 5:50 pm

you mean, right now?

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Post by stilltrucking » July 6th, 2008, 5:52 pm

that's what I was going for
right now.

sorry I tagged your poem LR

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