It All Went By Too Fast

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WIREMAN
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It All Went By Too Fast

Post by WIREMAN » July 7th, 2008, 9:24 am

between the lines
of age, I'm an
old man lookin'
@ my life
free to glide on
amber waves
beneath vast
repositories
the salt of earth
for what it's worth
mas rapido
fast track
jump on your camel
grab the tiger's tail
and ride

(a nod to neil young on this one, I'd-a-never-been the wired man I am without u.)<a href="http://smg.photobucket.com/albums/v497/ ... AN-3-1.jpg" target="_blank"><img src="http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v497/ ... AN-3-1.jpg" border="0" alt="Photobucket"></a>

sculptures that were lost in the fire.....shot taken @ casa sowebo (baltimore, md.) 'o5
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me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....

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Post by constantine » July 7th, 2008, 9:30 am

words to live by, wireman, words to live by.

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Post by Lightning Rod » July 7th, 2008, 11:38 am

not only that
but it keeps going faster and faster

like a mechanical bull
or levels of a video game
"These words don't make me a poet, these Eyes make me a poet."

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Post by saw » July 7th, 2008, 3:18 pm

right on the mark, mark.....oops I'm stuttering again....nice tip of the
hat to Mr. Young......and to livin'
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Post by hester_prynne » July 7th, 2008, 3:20 pm

Grab a rope and lasso your dreams, everyday.
You got it goin on Wireman.
Love it
H 8)
"I am a victim of society, and, an entertainer"........DW

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Post by WIREMAN » July 7th, 2008, 5:38 pm

thanks hest.....lrod.....steve....& dino.....big lifetime that is moving at whirlwind pace as it proceeds along an unpredictable path........
me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....

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Post by mnaz » July 8th, 2008, 1:01 am

Yes. Time keeps accelerating. A very strange, wild ride, this stretch... Hard to capture that feeling adequately in words. Nothing to do but hold on and ride. True..

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Post by judih » July 8th, 2008, 5:32 am

time? what time?
(did i miss somethin)

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