Age of the Steely Mammoth

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mnaz
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Age of the Steely Mammoth

Post by mnaz » July 24th, 2008, 2:33 am

I got miles of leather.
I got a steel dome like a hillock.
I got flip down screens in cupholders.
I got a fold down living room back there.
I got chrome towers like mad dinosaur teeth.
Man I gotta lotta cupholders and chrome.
Some day I might take a road trip.
I got flip down screens.

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Post by judih » July 24th, 2008, 5:13 am

scruffy but sexy,
skin like a coconut, smooth like craggy mountainsides
what's a DNA to do
move on, keep movin on

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Post by hester_prynne » July 24th, 2008, 1:38 pm

Veddy scruffy indeed.
Honk at me and whistle when you drive by, pretty pulease!!!!!!

H 8)
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Post by mnaz » July 24th, 2008, 2:21 pm

Keep movin' on, roll on.
I should go see the craggy mountainsides.
Savin' up for a tankful.
Some day, some day..
I might not see you.
I got flip down screens.

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Post by constantine » July 24th, 2008, 2:23 pm

this is pretty hip, mnaz. the tone, the language - neato!

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Post by mtmynd » July 24th, 2008, 2:49 pm

ride on, with them flip downs. cool read, nazzer.

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