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Odette
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con creama

Post by Odette » July 29th, 2008, 6:30 pm

We have met for afternoon tea
Emily, Anaïs and me

“Why can’t he see?” I gasp,
choking on a bun

Emily grasps the teapot
to pour for us

Anaïs raises an impossible
eyebrow, “Ah, Cherie!”

Takes my trembling hand so softly,

“Come stay a while in my closet,” Emily
coos.

“Non, my attic!
I myself shall lock you in!”

Anaïs dangles a golden key.
Last edited by Odette on July 29th, 2008, 7:13 pm, edited 2 times in total.

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Post by mtmynd » July 29th, 2008, 6:35 pm

:)

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Post by Odette » July 29th, 2008, 7:13 pm

merci

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Post by Doreen Peri » July 29th, 2008, 7:19 pm

great poem

glad you found your way here

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Post by Odette » July 29th, 2008, 7:22 pm

Un plaisir, Mademoiselle.

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Post by constantine » July 30th, 2008, 12:29 am

very nice. light, sensuouly mysterious.

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Post by SmileGRL » July 30th, 2008, 10:18 am

odette, your european touch is like a bonbon on my tongue. thank you for sharing these delicacies. the girl in me loves them!

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Post by Odette » July 30th, 2008, 10:29 am

Merci, constantine and Smile GRL.
Art cannot be modern.. Art is primordially eternal.
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Post by saw » July 30th, 2008, 11:54 am

quite a tea party, wish I was there as a fly on the wall...well done
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Post by Arcadia » July 30th, 2008, 1:01 pm

impossible
eyebrow


I like it!!!!!! :D & bienvenida, Odette!!!!

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Post by the mingo » July 30th, 2008, 1:04 pm

Lord,have mercy!
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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