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Honoring Constantine Pantazonis - RIP 6/16/14
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Post by constantine » August 6th, 2008, 9:45 am

i'm rita swag
from omaha
meat packer
then i quit
i've got strong arms
i lift my own
don't like it?
kiss my tit!
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Post by constantine » August 7th, 2008, 2:26 pm

this is a little limericky.
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Post by constantine » August 7th, 2008, 5:11 pm

...if it bit you in the ass
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Post by stilltrucking » August 7th, 2008, 5:28 pm

it is only rock and roll but I liked it

Like this song too
so don't let me encourage you

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Post by Doreen Peri » August 7th, 2008, 5:29 pm

Is rita swag a gay man?

Just wondering whether "meat packer" was a double entendre.

Yeah, a little limericky. Funny piece. Not sure exactly why but it made me laugh.

Believe it or not, I do laugh sometimes.


:lol:
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Post by constantine » August 7th, 2008, 6:54 pm

it is whatever you think it is. i don't interpret anymore. once it leaves my hands it's all subjective at that point.
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Post by stilltrucking » August 7th, 2008, 6:56 pm

I think I liked it
what ever it is
poem or limerick

sorry about the trashy biker music
I thought it was funny

shows you what kind of taste I got
so please pay me no mind
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Post by constantine » August 7th, 2008, 7:45 pm

the video was lifted - it wouldn't open - the girl was hot though! i consider it a poem. form matched content. i don't do established forms though i can and have. forms are constrictive. i feel like saying - hey form, bite me. even the haiku - of which so many are enamored - leaves me cold. they all have this yoda effect to them that screams how philosophical i am. pretentious. if i ever meet a real philosopher i'll shit my pants. truck's a philosopher, and makes me shit my pants with regularity.
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Post by stilltrucking » August 7th, 2008, 11:52 pm

I remember the first haiku that ever "clicked" for me. Seven or so years ago on lit kicks

snapped by synapses
by abbehill on June 27, 2002 11:00:00

lacy patterned leaves
rhythmic dance on the pavement
brought on by sunlight
I am glad I am keeping you regular, I must be the moral fiber in your diet.
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