magician's assistant

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magician's assistant

Post by Doreen Peri » September 3rd, 2008, 7:43 am

i am but a fraction
of a whole number,
a partial division of
an unequal equation,
a geometric shape sliced
in two like a disappearing
magician's assistant, only to reappear
in a blue sequined gown, off-shoulder,
my total sum off-centered by a wave
of a wand and though i am here and then
not here and then here again, i am fond
of how i find myself laid out prone
on a multiplication table,
somehow appearing as one
to an audience at intermission

pass the hat
i could use donations
and a lesson in math.
be careful when the illusionist
crosses your path.


dp.9.2.08

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Post by Artguy » September 3rd, 2008, 8:24 am

Fishnet stockings and a tux?

Nice piece...

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Post by the mingo » September 3rd, 2008, 10:28 am

ooo...fishnet stockings...I'll take mine with a seam in the back please...
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Post by Doreen Peri » September 3rd, 2008, 12:18 pm

thanks, you 2

interesting you both caught the fishnet stockings and i never even mentioned them

:)

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Post by Nazz » September 3rd, 2008, 5:01 pm

Well, myself, I'm half a man sometimes, but which half? Do fractions belong to their whole? Of course they do.. Nice mathematical workout, Doreen.

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Post by hester_prynne » September 4th, 2008, 12:54 am

Math and magic.....
A wonderful read....
H 8)
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Post by sweetwater » September 8th, 2008, 1:42 pm

do you have a business address?

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Post by sweetwater » September 8th, 2008, 1:48 pm

why would you publish a defamation poem???????


go figure

conceit and arrogance i suppose

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Post by Doreen Peri » September 8th, 2008, 2:02 pm

sweetwater -

Umm... no, it's not a defamation poem.

Where'd you get that idea?

It's a poem about a magician's assistant. A theater piece.

With math metaphors.

Shrug.

Conceit and arrogance? Moi?

Nope. You got the wrong poet.

I wonder why you came to these conclusions.

Do I have a business address? Yes. My home address is where I run my business. Why do you need my business address? Are you looking for a graphic designer? Or copywriter? That's the business I'm in.

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Post by Doreen Peri » September 8th, 2008, 2:03 pm

Oops... forgot to say thanks to Nazz and hester.

Thanks, you two.

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Post by stilltrucking » September 8th, 2008, 2:45 pm

I missed the fishnet stockings and tux kurt

I was thinking more like mickey mouse and the sorcerrer's apprentice,

I appreciate your quantum poetry Doreen, I mean it is so neat, like shroedinger's cat, who may or may not have a dirty dirty kitty litter box after being shut up in that sealed room for a hundred years now.
Does that make anysense, I am a goner for math Doreen, the essence of music they tell me. Hard to say which I know less about, music I think.
Sorry for the ramble, it just a statistical probablity that sooner or later I will post some probably irrelevant tangential words.
I hope I never give you any invidious honors baby sister.
Good title
we are in worse shape than I think if sunrise ever becomes a cliche :wink:

Ah sweetwater you have such a keen legal mind. 8)

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