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bennie2
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Post by bennie2 » September 21st, 2008, 6:30 pm

imagine if the river never let go of the ocean.

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Post by hester_prynne » September 21st, 2008, 8:12 pm

imagine the ocean, if the river never let go......

Reminds me of the glass half full or empty quandry.....
good food for ponderances.

H 8)
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Post by Nazz » September 22nd, 2008, 12:39 am

imagine if the ocean never let go of the rock.
imagine if the rock never let go of the sun.
imagine if the sun never let go of space.
imagine if space never let go of gravity.
imagine if gravity never let go of the river.

thanks Bennie. needed that.

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Post by goldenmyst » October 2nd, 2008, 10:36 am

Bennie, kind of reminds me of a Zen koan. There is so much thought in this.

John

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