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Lightning Rod
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Dreary Diary

Post by Lightning Rod » October 23rd, 2008, 10:40 pm

dear diary,

this day was just another day
no triumphs or disasters
no bankruptcies nor orgasms
just another day

the normal aches and pains
the usual palliatives
bodily processes and
a library of pesky memories

you know, just another day
where you watch the news
and shake your head
just go crazy once in a while

the paramedics are parked
in front of my house, jackals
waiting for my heart attack
just another day


"lit a cigarette on a parkin' meter
and walked on down the street.
It was a normal day."---Bob Dylan
"These words don't make me a poet, these Eyes make me a poet."

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Post by saw » October 28th, 2008, 5:48 am

I like the subtlety here LRod....the images of your normal day are perhaps not unfamiliar to you, but are also the rigors of a life that just sort of turned out this way, which I can relate to ...we learn to deal with our life's particularities so well, they become normal to us...
there is much depth here, enjoyed the ride.....steve
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you may end up where you are heading

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Post by goldenmyst » October 29th, 2008, 9:46 pm

You take an ordinary day and make it into an engaging poem. I enjoyed this much.

John

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Post by mnaz » October 30th, 2008, 1:17 am

I'd take one of those days right now. No triumphs or disasters. I've never been big on dramatic weather. Well, except for the odd monster heatwave I guess.

"Library of pesky memories"... Always.

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