World Domination (Autumn)

[Nazz]

Ocean on a lit leaf,
between dampening breaths.
Curl slightly in cold, restless repose.
Reflect distant electricity unknown,
or translucent pools like Rilke,
pure liquid until flight.

[SmileGRL]

a world captured inside a wet leaf. i like that it can be restless with lightening or transculent like a pool depending on how you look at it. enjoyed the more "old school" style too.

[mtmynd]

a nice way to reveal a new perspective that has reached you.

i like this...

[Nazz]

Thanks Smile and Cecil.. Sometimes ya just get tossed here and there by the cool Autumn breaths. On the AC I read how Rilke inspired Cenacle... read Rilke's 'Going Blind'. The cool breaths filled my window until a pause, and then I noticed the leaf..