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Post by SmileGRL » November 6th, 2008, 5:25 pm

have you ever felt like you were inside a bubble & you didn't want anyone to touch the bubble because then the bubble would burst but then another bubble comes along& merges with yours & for a second there you think your bubble is strong enough. but then the bubble bursts anyway...

because that's what bubbles do and, well, you aren't supposed to live inside a bubble

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Post by goldenmyst » November 6th, 2008, 6:24 pm

People are often fickle and cruel. However, I know you'll find someone to trust. Emerging from the bubble world into something solid and trust worthy can be liberating. I have faith in you. ;)

John

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Post by SmileGRL » November 7th, 2008, 2:45 pm

thanks john :)

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Post by mnaz » November 11th, 2008, 2:49 pm

Wisdom for living. Good thoughts, Smile.

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Post by SmileGRL » November 11th, 2008, 2:56 pm

mr. nazzy 8) ...thank you kindly

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Post by Perdida » November 11th, 2008, 3:23 pm

hey Mj, that happens to me everyday lol....kidding.

Sounds like good old Murphy is at it again.

Enjoyed

m :D
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Post by SmileGRL » November 11th, 2008, 3:33 pm

miss m :wink: ...i think this happens to a lot of people but shhh! nobody ever tells you, so...heh. i wrote this about a month ago while feeling low & vulnerable. and of course i'm such a fairy silly thing some days. thanks for enjoying ...& i have to check my mail... 8)

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