The Echo

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K&D
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Post by K&D » November 19th, 2008, 3:42 am

rubber balls, plastic nose
buy yourself a hose and hope it grows.
Go where you will, take a dose.

leaky pipes, dried up damns?
it’s the cyborg surge,
a postmodern catamaran

A canuee full of goo
I’m nothing, I always knew.
A sponge never imbue.

Narcissus and perpetual youth
Am I just an echo to your truth
Societies missing tooth.
Blah!

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Post by mtmynd » November 19th, 2008, 11:54 am

your rhymes, like echoes, cascading thru these images bringing me a smile. :)

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Post by hester_prynne » November 22nd, 2008, 5:56 pm

yeah, I dig this alot
H 8)
"I am a victim of society, and, an entertainer"........DW

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Post by Arcadia » November 22nd, 2008, 7:05 pm

I liked the last line: we are kids, we are old, we fell somewhere, we are ill or we have fighted or..? (I guess the first one fits better with the poem atmosphere! :wink: )

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