WIP Lost at the sea
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SadLuckDame
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Re: WIP Lost at the sea
I like it as if it was early in the day when the sun wasn't quite out (photo one), that lonely and longing, but within 'hours' we see the sun light it up. Really captivating for audience, for me.
`Do you know, I was so angry, Kitty,' Alice went on...`when I saw all the mischief you had been doing, I was very nearly opening the window, and putting you out into the snow! And you'd have deserved it, you
little mischievous darling!
~Lewis Carroll
little mischievous darling!
~Lewis Carroll
Re: WIP Lost at the sea
Thanks Doreen.
I think my problem has been being too concerned with overworking and as a result Ive stopped short and the painting was not as good as it could be.
Heres a couple I reworked recently.
original
rework
original
rework
The changes were pretty subtle, define this, remove that, darken the road a bit, change the sky. I put them into photoshop first and played around. The changes took less then 15 min but I think the paintings are better now.
I think my problem has been being too concerned with overworking and as a result Ive stopped short and the painting was not as good as it could be.
Heres a couple I reworked recently.
original
rework
original
rework
The changes were pretty subtle, define this, remove that, darken the road a bit, change the sky. I put them into photoshop first and played around. The changes took less then 15 min but I think the paintings are better now.
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