Wingless dreams

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Bryan
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Wingless dreams

Post by Bryan » November 20th, 2004, 11:23 am

The gentle sway of wingless dreams
lures silent dreamers mindless
marching endlessly to paradise-perfect
conformed and uniformed poets: what is this?

trapped under a faulty safety harness
built of hopes and fantasy
then carried away by wingless dreams
scarred by thoughts of flying away

yet grounded in the breeze of a windless land
silent dreamers caught in a web of desire
tangled in the cloth of wishes
then burst aflame in reality's fire

flesh charred and melted away
wrapped in a dreamers scream
left in a world of maybe
that I like to call my wingless dream
I invite you all to come share your works with us at sorrows corner a growing community of poetry

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Lightning Rod
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Post by Lightning Rod » November 20th, 2004, 1:12 pm

very nice piece, Bryan

it is lilting and lyrical

in fact it would make a good lyric

welcome to Studio Eight

I hope to see more of your work here.

lrod
"These words don't make me a poet, these Eyes make me a poet."

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WIREMAN
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Post by WIREMAN » November 23rd, 2004, 7:13 pm

vision...wax museum on fire
the celebrity hot and desired
curtains shattering, velvet red
pygmies drinking from meret
oppenheim's fur cups. dali
melting like wax down the
side of a clock, snapped fingers
alarm sounds the late for work
call, embracing a burnt out candle............wired

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