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joel
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H2O2

Post by joel » October 16th, 2007, 6:15 pm

As waters serve as symbols of your will,
O Love, I meditate on you—how molecules
of watered-life-necessity depend
on full agreement, right relation of
three atoms’ independent energies
in one sublime, divine, united place—
may Love be poured like rivers on the dry
expanse of who I am, forgive what I
would rather claim as self-engendered grace.
I contemplate the endless synergies
on which I’d rather lean than lone on Love—
as oxygen innocuous I rend
me in your watered will; I burn like fools
where hydrogen peroxide tortures kill.
"Every genuinely religious person is a heretic, and therefore a revolutionary" -- GBShaw

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stilltrucking
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Post by stilltrucking » October 16th, 2007, 6:35 pm

beautiful poem

crystal of h2o
Image
Something about Pi bonding I like
more tenuous than those clingy atoms



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good to see you back

I mean I was thinking where is joel, I have nto seen a poem by him in a while.
thanks for writing joel

sorry I got off on a tangent about water
I missread your poem :oops:
I blame it on the bitter herbs
yep
"I got stoned and I missed it"

please pardon post ramble

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