Words, burning, uttered,

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hester_prynne
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Words, burning, uttered,

Post by hester_prynne » March 18th, 2008, 2:23 am

When the monster roars,
too closeby,
despair catches on fire.

Hot coils of flame,
spew out,
a dragonized mouth.

Words, burning, uttered,
bring comfort,
to this context.

You on the other hand,
pretend,
it doesn't exist.
"I am a victim of society, and, an entertainer"........DW

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Post by westcoast » March 18th, 2008, 7:20 pm

dragons will do that to ya..intriquing

~westcoast

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Post by stilltrucking » March 19th, 2008, 3:29 am

Hot coils of flame,
spew out,
a dragonized mouth.
A dragonized heart I get
cold blooded and reptillian
must be a guy thing

We are all so civilized now
no one notices the monster
from the id.
except maybe TK
according to his tagline
"Wer mit Ungeheuern kämpft, mag zusehn, dass er nicht dabei zum Ungeheuer wird. Und wenn du lange in einen Abgrund blickst, blickt der Abgrund auch in dich hinein." (Nietzsche)
thanks hester
sorry for the ramble
probably nothing to do with your poem
just feeding off your energy
for my own private hell
to illuminate.

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