Offerings

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bennie2
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Offerings

Post by bennie2 » April 11th, 2008, 2:44 pm

each harmonic note
plucked from my guitar string soft
appeases the sky

her thundering brow
offering rain as reward
for sunken pleasures

sweet notes ring longest
so perhaps the rain will dance
between clouds and earth
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Post by westcoast » April 23rd, 2008, 3:47 pm

awesome, bennie :)

~westie
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