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Post by bennie2 » May 5th, 2008, 3:45 pm

armchair fucking critic
stuck in the rut of his own arse crack
his cheeks are carved in the cushion

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Post by gypsyjoker » May 5th, 2008, 7:35 pm

he knows women
got to wisecrack the whip
on their ass
keep them in line


just inspired by your little ditty
thanks
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Post by westcoast » May 5th, 2008, 10:38 pm

keep dat pimp hand strong
space cowboy

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Post by gypsyjoker » May 6th, 2008, 9:04 am

I try to follow Clay's policy of not taking anything personal.

Loser and a Poser
pocket full of heartache
laughing at sad jokes

wrote that for myself

fortunately I got holes in my pockets
I leave a trail of broken hearted laments
for the blue bird of happiness to follow
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Post by sooZen » May 6th, 2008, 10:26 am

Made me laugh Bennie...if'n a critic doesn't like something, that just means I need to see it, read it or hear it.
Freedom's just another word...



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