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Post by creativesoul » July 12th, 2008, 7:35 pm

the girl on this beach reminds me of a woman living with a crazy shrink for a while.She had convined herself he would never find her.She had tried to tell him that; she would show him where to stay if she would not have to kill him.
She treid ti apaologize to me several timesand she just seemed as if her tongue was still swallowing a mouse. tail haning out of it s mouth.
she was quiet.

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Post by stilltrucking » July 12th, 2008, 7:44 pm

I used to wonder if shrinks cured people by soaking up all the craziness in their own heads. Just one of those weird thoughts that came in the night.
Some crazy shrinks out there.

don't know what to make of this one CS but that is a pretty vivid image the tail hanging out of her mouth.

When I saw the title of this post I thought it was going to be those pictures you talked about a long time ago.
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Post by the mingo » July 12th, 2008, 9:20 pm

The girl on the beach up there is actually suffocating an emoticon with her ass. He's trying to scream but he can't because he can't get enough oxygen in to power out. She's looking down the beach at the group of people nearest her wondering if they can tell that she is murdering an emoticon in plain sight. She thinks not. When the emoticon ceases struggling she will look back out to sea with a smile on her lips.
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Post by Doreen Peri » July 12th, 2008, 9:27 pm

mingo... lol.. :shock: :lol: :D 8)
you crack me up!

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Post by westcoast » July 12th, 2008, 9:29 pm

OMG

~westie

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Post by Lightning Rod » July 12th, 2008, 9:30 pm

I thought that making love on a beach would be romantic
until I tried it once
pure grit
"These words don't make me a poet, these Eyes make me a poet."

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Post by stilltrucking » July 13th, 2008, 10:37 am

I am surely no expert on the art of love
But I think You got to get In the water
they did no show that part in the picture.

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