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hester_prynne
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Post by hester_prynne » July 24th, 2008, 2:26 pm

I'm a stern old bitch,
don'tlikeit?lumpit,
gotta mouth like a twitch
aintafraidtothumpit,
you might not like it
ifyouisagirlorman
wonder why I do it?
becuzmydoveican

I like to see em quiver
doadancearoundmybullets
If I were a barber
idgiveyeallmullets
you'd be just the way
thatithinkyoushould
wonder why I'd do it?
becausemyduckicould

I know more than everything
shrugwhatcanisay
I lived a hard life
nothinwentmyway
that is how I learned it all
youvebeennowherecomparedtome
my wonderin days are over
iknoweveryscoreyousee

so just go with how I see it
youcannotmatchmywizen
I should rule the world
andalsothehorizen
you couldn't possibly have
thedepththativebeengiven
I wonder why they don't know
withoutmetheyaintlivin
"I am a victim of society, and, an entertainer"........DW

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Post by constantine » July 24th, 2008, 2:30 pm

you kill me theda. funny stuff. dontlikeitlumpit!!

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Post by mtmynd » July 24th, 2008, 2:47 pm

dang it, Hes'... i misplaced my 20 foot pole,
but i sure liked what i read... fo sure! ;)

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Post by SmileGRL » July 24th, 2008, 3:48 pm

fun read. reminds me of the joke, why does a dog lick his balls? because he can.

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Post by mnaz » July 24th, 2008, 4:18 pm

Yep.
It's the bounce-back.
Well done, Hest.

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Post by saw » July 25th, 2008, 10:21 am

this made me reconsider trying to explain myself...i can see now,
that it would a ridiculous endeavor to try.....the world is a complicated
place full of the inexplicable ....this poem however,

says it all with cool
wordplay and rhymes ...
matter of fact,
I'll read it a few more times...
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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