Meteorologic Love Story

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Meteorologic Love Story

Post by Lightning Rod » September 2nd, 2008, 1:20 am

Gustav and Katrina met in New Orleans
it was a category five kinda night
in the French Quarter of their desires

She had already devastated the place
she was irresistible and by the time he arrived
the levees were higher but they had the place to themselves

Gustav's Scandinavian blood made him a natural raider
Viking with a single sail and oars
Katrina was a Russian, more complex and deadly

They chose the waltz counterclockwise
she leads, he follows and they bend the palms
together
Dancing in a hurricane.
"These words don't make me a poet, these Eyes make me a poet."

The Poet's Eye

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Post by constantine » September 2nd, 2008, 11:53 am

creative, witty, and timely.

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Post by judih » September 2nd, 2008, 12:55 pm

sublime.
waltzing to a different drummer

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Post by Lightning Rod » September 2nd, 2008, 3:03 pm

thanks dino and judih

just trying to lighten up on a heavy situation
"These words don't make me a poet, these Eyes make me a poet."

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Post by Arcadia » September 3rd, 2008, 1:41 pm

cute!! :)

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Post by sweetwater » September 8th, 2008, 1:45 pm

vikings are more civilized than one would think
signed by the raiders of the roman empire

history seems superimposed by hollywoodisms!!

doncha think?????????

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