kung fu plastic
the stuff of condoms
deft movements
elastic bowel ornament
an ointment of pure
ballistic hologram
game machine exercise
real as a pixel dream
a Darwin selection for
stupidity and a willingness to spend
on cosmetic and needless clothing
Walmart Divas and Divos
fat before their time on
kung fu plastic
sit com Home Depot
and dow jones elastic
kung fu plastic
- Lightning Rod
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rubber balls, plastic nose
buy yourself a hose
and hope it grows.
leaky pipes, dried up damns?
its a cyborg surge
a postmodern catamaran
(the beining of you poem evoked a lot of imagry, i think i could probably write a whole poem about the images it evokes. I read an article by Marksimpson about his blog that says were becoming Clonosexual because of fasion etc etc....link here http://www.marksimpson.com/
I like his writting a lot, he writes like your post too...not poetry you know your prose. )
I most have liked the poem, it managed to inspire some sort of peotic response and i seem to be such a slow writter these days.
buy yourself a hose
and hope it grows.
leaky pipes, dried up damns?
its a cyborg surge
a postmodern catamaran
(the beining of you poem evoked a lot of imagry, i think i could probably write a whole poem about the images it evokes. I read an article by Marksimpson about his blog that says were becoming Clonosexual because of fasion etc etc....link here http://www.marksimpson.com/
I like his writting a lot, he writes like your post too...not poetry you know your prose. )
I most have liked the poem, it managed to inspire some sort of peotic response and i seem to be such a slow writter these days.
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- stilltrucking
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I like it a lot but I think nigger rich would be a better title
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