kung fu plastic

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Lightning Rod
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kung fu plastic

Post by Lightning Rod » November 18th, 2008, 12:33 am

kung fu plastic
the stuff of condoms
deft movements
elastic bowel ornament

an ointment of pure
ballistic hologram
game machine exercise
real as a pixel dream

a Darwin selection for
stupidity and a willingness to spend
on cosmetic and needless clothing
Walmart Divas and Divos

fat before their time on
kung fu plastic
sit com Home Depot
and dow jones elastic
"These words don't make me a poet, these Eyes make me a poet."

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Post by K&D » November 18th, 2008, 1:18 am

rubber balls, plastic nose
buy yourself a hose
and hope it grows.

leaky pipes, dried up damns?
its a cyborg surge
a postmodern catamaran


(the beining of you poem evoked a lot of imagry, i think i could probably write a whole poem about the images it evokes. I read an article by Marksimpson about his blog that says were becoming Clonosexual because of fasion etc etc....link here http://www.marksimpson.com/

I like his writting a lot, he writes like your post too...not poetry you know your prose. )

I most have liked the poem, it managed to inspire some sort of peotic response and i seem to be such a slow writter these days.
Blah!

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Post by Nazz » November 18th, 2008, 2:24 am

A big old house of kung fu plastic is teetering. The army of good little consumer units powers the whole system, but it's squeezed and over-leveraged. I wouldn't want to be a "retailer" right now.. well, except for maybe Wal Mart-- (cheap stuff).

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Post by stilltrucking » November 18th, 2008, 2:06 pm

I like it a lot but I think nigger rich would be a better title

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