A bud sans pipe

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A bud sans pipe

Post by hester_prynne » November 22nd, 2008, 6:54 pm

A bud
sans pipe.
Think of it.
Now this is tragedy.
Picture me, wishing
woefully,
if only I could just
get high
on it's smell.
(It has a glorious smell)
You know,
I've lived through
many equations
my friends,
but this one
beats em all.
A big, juicy
fragrant bud,
right here
in my hand,
no pipe
to smoke it in.
It's a metaphor
of glorious
unthinkableness.
Tragedy quadrupled.
A perfect place
for those red curtains
to sweepingly close.
The perfect cue
for you,
my beloved audience,
to shuffle out,
stunned,
appreciative,
silent.
Fini.
"I am a victim of society, and, an entertainer"........DW

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Post by Arcadia » November 22nd, 2008, 7:00 pm

ok! :)

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Post by constantine » November 22nd, 2008, 9:03 pm

how do you say marijuana in spanish? somehow, theda, i think you'll
work it out. i believe in you.

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Post by Doreen Peri » November 22nd, 2008, 9:05 pm

gotta beer can? :D

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Post by Lightning Rod » November 22nd, 2008, 10:04 pm

the only thing sadder than a bud sans pipe
is a pipe sans bud

where there's a will, there's a way hest
"These words don't make me a poet, these Eyes make me a poet."

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Post by judih » November 22nd, 2008, 11:33 pm

aluminum foil
inverted glass
adventures await

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Post by saw » November 23rd, 2008, 12:59 pm

if necessity is the mother of invention
and a beautiful bud is in your possession
let the grandeur of potential intoxication
stimulate the seeds of your imagination.

good stuff, hest....i have faith in you.....
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Post by hester_prynne » November 23rd, 2008, 6:39 pm

Don't ask me why, but right now, reading your responses, my heart is full...
I feel a tribal sense of delight.
Thanks youse
H 8)
"I am a victim of society, and, an entertainer"........DW

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Post by stilltrucking » November 23rd, 2008, 10:48 pm

an apple works too

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Post by mnaz » November 24th, 2008, 12:44 pm

Nature finds a way..

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Post by Perdida » November 24th, 2008, 3:48 pm

ahhh hester, it's always a pleasure to read you...smiling at this one, and you.

:D
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Post by mtmynd » November 24th, 2008, 10:46 pm

Hes', Hes'...

It's a metaphor
of glorious
unthinkableness.


now that! so fine... glorious unthinkableness. i found that better than a bud tonight, i did. ;)

another cool read. TY!

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Post by SmileGRL » November 26th, 2008, 3:10 pm

she inhales flowers
glorius. juicy. strong
don't close the curtain
i wan't to see everything

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