shine and spell

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sweetwater
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shine and spell

Post by sweetwater » January 7th, 2009, 6:38 pm

The floor plans of phase one ...
the spiral and scroll curled underneath a compass
as an architecture of the mind

as simple in phrase and music
counting syllables
in a wine glass and synonyms

the square as first amongst fools
to symbolize the overture
and create a sign

the rest was deciphered by design
as passage or staircase
ladders to a nether plan and world

she first stepped into a mess
seeing first a room the candle light and dress
having last seen everything she did contest

wearing upon her crown
a jewel case and locked drawer
in all one’s memories

a box
and dreams stolen
by men with swords

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Post by Doreen Peri » January 7th, 2009, 6:51 pm

Gawd this is beautiful!

Wonderful phrasing, images, meter ... subtle rhymes... rolls off the tongue

and there are levels of meaning here that challenge the mind

It's a really nice piece. I'll read it several times.

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