The Heightened Sense of a Dog

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saw
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The Heightened Sense of a Dog

Post by saw » April 3rd, 2009, 3:52 am

That big black moron mongrel
is barking again like a lobotomized bird
that snarls and slobbers every five seconds
instead of a merely annoying cuckoo.

I've learned to mark time by the hoarseness
in his vile throat, my attempts at quieting
the wretched excuse for a canine by sticking
my head our the window and screaming,

Shut The Fuck Up ! You Miserable Mangy Mangle
of Shit !....have fallen on deaf ears that are supposed
to hear frequencies that I cannot, Yeah, Right !
Mans Best Friend My Ass !
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Post by Perdida » April 3rd, 2009, 5:11 am

omg I love this!

having gone through this with an ex-neighbours dog, sighs i DON'T even want to think about it lol, I understand completely and sympathise.... the diference being, that i could not of written it as fabulously as you have.

really really enjoyed.

thank you Saw :D
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