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Arcadia
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Post by Arcadia » June 15th, 2009, 1:57 pm

if you believe the news
we are in cuarentena
and in a risk to became
an inflated-narco-dealers-stalinist regime
and you
live now
in a weird old-man-teenager-fest country
fixated in Bertolucci & Coppola
Yeah, I know
we had to say that.
Are we able to begin?

cinco minutos

si creés en las noticias
estamos en cuarentena
y en el riesgo de convertirnos
en forma explícita
en un régimen inflacionario
de narcotraficantes
y estalinistas
y vos,
vivís ahora
en un viejo-adolescente país en fiesta
con fijación en Bertolucci y Coppola.
Sí, ya sé
tuvimos que decir eso.
Podemos empezar?

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Post by hester_prynne » June 15th, 2009, 10:07 pm

Bravo my dear!
H 8)
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Post by .Lucy. » June 16th, 2009, 12:18 pm

Si, tenias que decirlo porque nadien mas tiene el coraje de escribirlo...

Espero que no hice muchas faltas de ortografia...aunque soy una nativa del idioma, no lo escribo a menudo...
The road to happiness: Perseverance, Endurance and a whole lot of Hope.

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Post by Arcadia » June 20th, 2009, 7:58 pm

gracias, both of you for reading! :)

sí, Lucy... el coraje es algo sumamente personal! :lol: Y escribís muy bien, no te preocupes por las faltas de ortografía!!!!!! :wink: Recuerdo que hablaste sobre abuelos o tíos chilenos una vez, así que me imagino que tu acento debe ser chileno, no?. Qué lindo!!!!!!!

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