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damn you

Post by mtmynd » June 22nd, 2009, 11:58 am

damn you
it's all your fault
you are to blame
this world is sick
this world is nutz
and you are to blame


damn you
why weren't you awake
why didn't you see it
why didn't you care..?
and now it's falling apart
beyond any fixing anything

damn you
you've crippled my world
you've broken all the rules
you've shamed your children
and now look around closely
what do you see..?

damn you
you should be ashamed
you should know better
you should be honest
you should be authentic
but you're a liar and a thief
you've fucked it all up

damn you
what did you really expect
what did you think would happen
what did you really want from it
what is going on in your head
just open your eyes and look
at the mess it all is and
it's not getting any better

damn you
you think you can buy your way out
do you believe you have an answer
do you believe someone has an answer
do you think god is gonna get you
do you? do you? do you?

damn you
and all the bullshit you've put me thru
stolen all my treasures and dreams
you've ripped off everything good
a common thief in the night
you can no longer be trusted
you have fucked it all up

damn you
i promised you a life in a garden
you called it eden but wanted more
and look what you've ended up with
you will pay for your stupidity
you will pay for your crimes
you will pay for your ignorance
you will pay! you will pay! you will pay!

damn you
why didn't you listen?
why didn't you listen?
why didn't you listen?

why?
why?
why?


Nature
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Post by Doreen Peri » June 22nd, 2009, 1:09 pm

I told you it was all my fault.

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Post by mtmynd » June 22nd, 2009, 3:36 pm

but i wouldn't listen ... just had to see where it ends up... i hope you're happy...



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Post by Doreen Peri » June 22nd, 2009, 3:43 pm

well, since you blamed me, I took the blame. deservingly so, i suppose. I hope you're happy now. :P

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Post by mtmynd » June 22nd, 2009, 3:47 pm

speaking for Nature, I can assure you that we're all damned at this point in our evolution, but what else can we do except smile..?

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Post by Doreen Peri » June 22nd, 2009, 4:01 pm

:D

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Post by mtmynd » June 22nd, 2009, 4:19 pm

((you have such a nice smile...))
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Post by Doreen Peri » June 22nd, 2009, 4:46 pm

Image

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Post by mtmynd » June 22nd, 2009, 4:53 pm

ear-to-ear!

i told you so!

:)
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Post by hester_prynne » June 22nd, 2009, 10:43 pm

Damn! I love this! It speaks my volumes!!!!!!
H 8)
"I am a victim of society, and, an entertainer"........DW

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Post by mtmynd » June 23rd, 2009, 12:27 am

thx mucho, Hes'... it liked you as well! ;)
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Post by Nazz » June 23rd, 2009, 12:12 pm

Hey man, sorry. Didn't mean to piss on your Cheerios like that! Ha. Ha.

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Post by mtmynd » June 23rd, 2009, 7:40 pm

"...piss on your Cheerios.."

:lol: funny line!
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