At The End Of The Day

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Dave The Dov
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At The End Of The Day

Post by Dave The Dov » January 1st, 2005, 9:13 am

I drive past the bakery factory
The American flag is hanging by a thread
on the pole
Just flapping there in the breeze
So much for America
as I round the corner
and turn onto the ajoining
street
It was New Years Eve
No more 2004
So Long!!!!
Here comes 2005
and guess what I'm still alive!!!!
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Post by shamatha1 » January 4th, 2005, 11:26 am

I like this Dave. Very whimsical. I laughed out loud at these lines:

The American flag is hanging by a thread
on the pole
Just flapping there in the breeze
So much for America

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