I used to like you

Post by **Doreen Peri** » July 8th, 2009, 2:49 am

I used to like you.
I don't like you any more.
Judge me with your bullshit
and I'm out the door.

That's a poem.
How do I know that?
It rhymes.

You don't even know me.
Remember that, my friend.
This is a poem.
The end.

Post by **constantine** » July 8th, 2009, 5:51 am

you're a meanie! remind me not to get on your bad side - unless i already am, in which case don't remind me. cool poem.

Post by **Perdida** » July 8th, 2009, 7:10 am

straight to the point Doreen, no bullshit from you girlie.

smiles

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Post by **saw** » July 8th, 2009, 9:51 am

at some point it hits us, that a certain so and so isn't worth another minute of effort......seems like your there.....lines in the sand can be liberating.....nice work

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Post by **stilltrucking** » July 8th, 2009, 10:18 am

I don't know her
well I know her as well
as one can know another in cyber space
from their text and art and music

she is a straight shooter
above all she has integrity

Not to ramble Doreen
I know it is a poem
because of the economy of words

Post by **Arcadia** » July 8th, 2009, 10:49 am

yeah, limits are limits!

Post by **Doreen Peri** » July 8th, 2009, 1:20 pm

Thanks you guys.

I thought the funny part was when I called him or her "my friend" at the end.

Hahaha!

Just a silly little snitty ditty.

Seriously though, I love you guys. Each and every one of you. I love everybody! Everybody might not love me but I don't care. I love them anyway.

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