gotta live first

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keithalanhamilton
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gotta live first

Post by keithalanhamilton » September 12th, 2009, 9:12 am

what’s this all for and about
I mean the living thing, anyhow
and too who am I, this me
my body alive having some sense
why, why do I feel so much stuff
overloading my heart with emotion
tell me, when I began to think
as if to be dissatisfied with just being
geez, where will life lead me
down a path filled with meaning
oh how will all my living end
maybe, I gotta live first to know

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Post by hester_prynne » September 12th, 2009, 8:41 pm

The last line on this rocks it.
Enjoyed
H 8)
"I am a victim of society, and, an entertainer"........DW

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Post by keithalanhamilton » September 13th, 2009, 11:30 am

Thanks, I truly enjoy your work as well. :)

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