the illustrious faults of the fool

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mtmynd
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the illustrious faults of the fool

Post by mtmynd » March 7th, 2010, 3:15 pm

the illustrious faults of the fool


stop it now! stop that staring

you know it's not right or even

possible to see thru concrete...

who do you think you are,

some kinda superhero with

a cape that will make you invisible

and eyes that pierce to the essence

all things within their focus? boo-shit.

not a chance. not even close, fool.
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Post by stilltrucking » March 7th, 2010, 3:26 pm

"Shazam"
Spent so much time as a kid trying to pronounce that word correctly.
Captain Marvel had nothing on me.

You just wrote my life story Cecil.

Yep 8)

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mnaz
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Post by mnaz » March 7th, 2010, 10:13 pm

haha. sometimes the stare is simply to "singe" its subject.

when I drank whiskey in the desert, sometimes I got a little invisible...

(just a little)

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